There was a Wisper but no one was there???

We had to write our Writing test It had to be about a wispier but no one was there. I wanted mine to be like a movie.This was hard I tried to give lot's of detail but with less paragraphs.

In 1956 there was a strange sound going around into people's homes killing everything they loved and cherished.

Ella I’m at your door now cried out a mysterious voice who is it watch out I know karate. There was a mysterious voice lurking around her farm calling out watch your back and look after your cow’s. Until One day as the cookie shaped moon rose from out behind the tree tops.

Ella heard a sound a weird sound that reminded her of when she was a baby It went a bit like. there's a sound that no one’s heard there's a sound of chirping bird but if you listen you can hear that sound of a lovely moose. tears rolled down her face her parent’s have past away in a car crash her mother used to sing that to her when she was little girl.

The sun rose and the birds started singing their morning songs. Ella woke up bright and early at five o'clock She went outside to feed the cow’s. When she found that her cow’s have died her bucket fell to the ground and bucket’s full of water came bursting out of her eye’s. She dialled 911. They raced over here to figure out what happened.

They took year’s to find out what has happened by the time they figured out what happened Ella has past away. Ella was only ten when her cow’s died her parent’s took care of her well she had to look after the farm all by herself.They figured out that the mysterious voice was Mr Wickom he murder a lot of people and animals the police throw him in Jail for life he has never been seen again.