Wednesday, 12 June 2013

Adding to the middle of the sentences

WALT add details in the middle of the sentences

pears have  spots called speckles.
As I look in the fruit bowl I see that the pears have spots called  speckles on them .   


Mr Burt, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt, who loves kids and is a very good guitar player, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, where  the whole school comes together to learn new things on Friday.

Lots of people  visit  Auckland city  in New Zealand.

Lots of people from different   countries love to come and  visit  the beautiful Auckland city  in New Zealand.