Monday, 10 June 2013

My writing goal

When I write I am learning to write some complex sentences which have more detail.

There are some Animals in Antarctica that eat and kill some weird Animals.Those Animal that eat and kill weird things is an(Orca)Killer whale,Leopard seal and more all those animals are called predators.

Predators can be mean because as soon as they have their food in there mouth they tear them to bites.They eat fish,krill,penguins,squid some whales even eat each other is the circle of life for them.   

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