WALT adding detail to the end of sentences

WALT adding detail to the end of sentences

Children had to stay inside at lunchtime on Friday because of heavy rain,thunder and lighting.

Akiko works in a sushi

bar where she sells 

sushi to customers all around the world.

My hungry tummy is rumbling! after our two laps around the school.

W.A.L.T Adding detail to the middle of sentences.

W.A.L.T Adding detail to the middle of sentences.

Baleen whales are toothless whales that eat    plankton,there are two types of plankton  and one of them is called a zooplankton which is a animal one and the other one is called a phytoplankton that is the plant one ,they also eat little animals like krill.

Learning my times tables like my 1s, 2s, and 3s help me so I can be super smart,times tables a also very important.

Playtime is so fun because that’s the time we don’t have to learn and we get to play and it is a bit late because most schools have theirs at ten thirty our time is at 11 am.

All the year 5 and 6 children at Pt England school  have their very own learning tool which is called netbooks.

Children from Pt england school had to stay inside their classrooms because of the heavy rain at lunchtime on Friday.

WALT-adding to the begging of sentence

WALT -adding to the begging of sentence

Did you know that I have a best friend named Akiki that works in a sushi bar?

After a really long Swimming lesson at the pools, my hungry tummy was rumbling.  

Red and Yellow chart

Today we have been trying to  find out how many red and yellow counters were in a bag we knew there were five counters in the bag but we didn't how many of each colour there were.So we recorded and made a pie chart to show you how many of each colour there was there was three yellow and two red's.     

Antarctica Food Chain

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This is a  picture of how a food chain works in Antarctica 

Aeroplanes New Zealand/ Hercules

This is about what's in a Hercules plane if you were going to Antarctica in one and what would be in a Air New Zealand plane  if you were travelling some were in one.

Seals adding to the end

WALT-add to the end of the sentences

Antarctica seals have a thick layer of blubber under their skin,to keep them warm in the freezing snowy Antarctica.

During winter the sun does not rise in Antarctica,so its dark even in the Afternoon.

Leopard seals prey on Antarctica penguins,because their hungry for food.

    

   

Adding to the middle of the sentences

WALT add details in the middle of the sentences

pears have  spots called speckles.
As I look in the fruit bowl I see that the pears have spots called  speckles on them .   

     

Mr Burt, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt, who loves kids and is a very good guitar player, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, where  the whole school comes together to learn new things on Friday.

Lots of people  visit  Auckland city  in New Zealand.

Lots of people from different   countries love to come and  visit  the beautiful Auckland city  in New Zealand.

Antarctic penguins

My writing goal

When I write I am learning to write some complex sentences which have more detail.

There are some Animals in Antarctica that eat and kill some weird Animals.Those Animal that eat and kill weird things is an(Orca)Killer whale,Leopard seal and more all those animals are called predators.

Predators can be mean because as soon as they have their food in there mouth they tear them to bites.They eat fish,krill,penguins,squid some whales even eat each other whales.it is the circle of life for them.   

Tangrams

On Thursday the 6th of june 2013 Room 17 literacy group were doing tangrams.Tangrams are seven pieces that fit into a shape.If the seven pieces on the paper are arranged correctly, they will fit exactly into the shape.

My tangram that I made is a tree to make one you need five triangle, one squares and one parlogram. You need some crayons,scissors

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