Adding to the middle of the sentences

WALT add details in the middle of the sentences

pears have  spots called speckles.
As I look in the fruit bowl I see that the pears have spots called  speckles on them .   

     

Mr Burt, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt, who loves kids and is a very good guitar player, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, where  the whole school comes together to learn new things on Friday.

Lots of people  visit  Auckland city  in New Zealand.

Lots of people from different   countries love to come and  visit  the beautiful Auckland city  in New Zealand.

Antarctic penguins

My writing goal

When I write I am learning to write some complex sentences which have more detail.

There are some Animals in Antarctica that eat and kill some weird Animals.Those Animal that eat and kill weird things is an(Orca)Killer whale,Leopard seal and more all those animals are called predators.

Predators can be mean because as soon as they have their food in there mouth they tear them to bites.They eat fish,krill,penguins,squid some whales even eat each other whales.it is the circle of life for them.   

Tangrams

On Thursday the 6th of june 2013 Room 17 literacy group were doing tangrams.Tangrams are seven pieces that fit into a shape.If the seven pieces on the paper are arranged correctly, they will fit exactly into the shape.

My tangram that I made is a tree to make one you need five triangle, one squares and one parlogram. You need some crayons,scissors

Solving multupaction questoin

My Antarctica Whales quiz

My Gragh

Today I learnt that the deeper you go down the Antarctica ocean it gets warmer.