tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8895197272736477496.post4456967855028980298..comments2023-05-20T22:29:12.145+12:00Comments on Ariana: Show not tell Mystics vs MagicsPES Blogs 2013 Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043164228733682681noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8895197272736477496.post-79409827940773616352016-06-10T14:40:53.845+12:002016-06-10T14:40:53.845+12:00Kiaorana Ariana. You have made a good attempt at...Kiaorana Ariana. You have made a good attempt at 'showing' rather than 'telling' the story. I'd love to re-visit this post to see what the next 2 paragraphs will contain.Mrs Tele'ahttp://talanoamai.blogspot.co.nznoreply@blogger.com